PLANNING- Revised Shot List/Storyboard Changes

1. Close up of TV, slow zoom, shot of protagonist on sofa.
2. Zoom of previous shot,
3. Long shot of table with religious items and Polaroids
4. Close up of Polaroids, title, jump cut to next shot
5. Medium shot of child playing on the floor
6. Close up of Polaroids, title
7. Mid shot of protagonist from behind watching TV
8. Mid shot of child playing with toys, zoom up
9. Close up of Polaroids, title
10. Medium shot of TV and sofa
11. Close up of Polaroids, title
12. Medium high angle shot of door
13. Close up, low angle of door handle
14. Close up of Polaroids, title
15. Low angle, long shot of door from the bottom of the stairs
16. Long shot of door
17. Extreme close up of lock on door
18. Close up of Polaroids, title
19. Long shot of boy playing with toys
20. Close up of Polaroids, title
21. Close up of male torture victims hands
22. Extreme close of of victims face
23. Close up of Polaroids, title
24. High angle, extreme close up of protagonist and victims
25. Long shot of female torture victim
26. Close up of polaroids
27. Blurred medium shot of protagonist
28. Blurred but then changes into focused extreme close up of protagonists eye

Since we made our first shot list and story boarded, we decided that we needed to make some changes to the storyboard. We changed it by adding in a few more shots and more shots of the Polaroids in order to fit in more titles. After we changed this we made additional changes such as adding in a wider variety of camera angles as we didn't have many angles it was mainly camera distances so we made some more changes. As well as is we changed some of the timings of the shots, some were too long and some weren't long enough; I still need to write the timings on the shot list which will be done once we have decided. We still need to make some changes to the storyboard and the shot list such as changing the shot transitions to make it more interesting and to change the meaning of some shots. We can still make changes to the storyboard after we have done the anamatic so I think that we will change the transitions once we've seen what it looks like on the anamatic.

This is the story board from beginning to end.