'Discuss the way social status is represented in this extract from Merlin.'
- I found this essay slightly easier to write about than the other essays which I had previously written as I felt like I had learnt a lot more about what I needed to include in the essays such as the technical language and more analysis.
- My targets from my previous essay was to avoid descriptions and emphasis the technical aspects and to revise semiotics, particularly indexical and iconography.
- I had got C's on all of my previous essays which I had been very happy with as my target grade for Media is a B so I didn't have that much to improve on in order to achieve this.
- In this essay I achieved a C again. I was happy with this grade but I do think that I could improve as my grade has stayed the same since my first essay which suggests that I haven't improved.
Targets:
- Use the appropriate terminology
- Respond to the question, addressing the question at the opening of each paragraph.
- Be more detailed in the analysis of editing
From the feedback I can see that I have achieved the target to avoid descriptions however I still need to revise the terminology and address the question. These are things which I will be focusing on in my next essay.
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